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Originally posted by maikasH
aadaab dosto,
Ghazal ka matlaa pehle likha , socha tha ke ek musalsal Ghazal kehne ki koshish karuuNga lekin phir Gham-e-yaaraN ke takaazey se mooNh na phera gaya to Ghazal yuuN huii, aapki khidmat meiN pesh kar raha huuN
Ghazal ka matlaa mere ustaad-e-mutarim ke aNdaaz-e-sukhan ka saaya hai, voh aksar ziNdagi ki kadvi sacchaiiyoN ko sukhan meN dhaalte rahe haiN, maine kabhi tassavur taq na kiya tha ke maiN kabhi is silsiley meiN koi she'r kahuuNga lekin in dinoN ziNdagi kuch aisi berukhii se pesh aa rahi hai ke yuuN hi chalte chalte do misrey zehan meiN aaye aur is Ghazal ka aaGhaaz hua.....pehle do misroN meiN ek aise mehnatkash aadmi ka haal-e-dil bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai jo din bhar jee toD mehnat karta hai aur shaam ko jab uski hatheli par do sikkey Tikaa diye jaate haiN jis se voh apna aur apne parivaar ka ek liye do roTiiyaaN taq na khareed sake to voh apne haathoN ke zakhmoN ko dekhte hue ro padta hai.........khair aap Ghazal mulaiiza kijiye :-
miley na jo mehnat se do bhi nivaale
roya maiN dekh apne haathoN ke chhalley
kareiN bhi gilaa ab to kis se kareiN
humhiiN ne to saaNp aasteenoN meiN paale
Gham-e-ziNdagi ke aNdheroN meiN jaanaaN
terii yaad ki sham'aa se haiN ujaale
kuch aur hi baat thi unki saaqi
vo dete the bhar ke jo aaNkhoN se pyaale
badi aarzoo hai ke mehNdii lagaa kar
vo aa ke mere kafn pe khaak daale
chali aana saara jahaaN aazmaa kar
maiN baiThaa huuN apni wafa ko saNbhaale
"maikash" tere baad dhooNdeNge tujhko
"sharaabi,sharaabi" tujhe kehne vaale
kahir aNdesh
maikash
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salaam walekum maikash ji......
ek baat janna chahati hu ji.jaisa apne kaha ki shuru ke line me ek mehnti shaqs ka zikar hai.....ok baat thik hai...lekin aapne uske baad jo likh hai usme mujhe thoda sa pyaar aur asteen me saanp palne ki baat aur pyar me jo gam hota hai uska jikr kiya hai aisa laga...aapne pyaar me gum aur uss mehanti shaqs ko ek saath kyu likha.............
plz mujhe samjhaiye mujhme dimmag thoda kam hai na isi liye kuch jaldi samajh nahi aata hai ji...........agar kuch galat likh diya hai meine to maaf kar dijiyega.....
shukriya ji
gratse
aapki dost
pooja