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9th May 2007, 01:10 AM
Sony ji, salaam.

Aaj apko pahali martabaa padha. Padha to bahot achha laga apka likha. Likha apka har lafz geharaai liye hai. Ek khub'surat kalaam par is nachiiz ki daad kabuul kijiiyegaa.

sukun se Darr yu lagta hain,
Dard_e_dil ka,Alam tha,
Andhero ki adat itni thi,
ke roshni karNa,Bhul gAye.


bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye.

Ye do sher laajavaab hai. Bahot khuub likha hai, likhti rahiye.

Grazie

Aapki dost
Pooja

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