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2nd April 2009, 06:18 PM

Hi Shaan Bhai...

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Originally Posted by Fathomless View Post
Maine bhi kisi se pyar kiya hai…….
Bahut hi achha title aur behad lubhavani shuruat.. Is baat ko dhyan mein rakhte hue ki ye
aapki pehli koshish hai, main bata bhi nahin sakta ki ye mujhe khoobsurat lagi...
Bahut hi achhi aur bahut hi dilkash rachna aur usse bhi pyare "Ehsaas"

Bas 2 lines shero.n mein apna sujaav dena chahunga

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Originally Posted by Fathomless View Post
Aanchal mein choopa hoon main bhi kisi ke,
Awaaro.n ki tarah maine pyar kiya hai,
Aapne pehli line mein kaha, Aanchal mein choopa hoon toh bas itna hi kahunga ki chipe hue insaan ko aawara kehna sahi nahin lagta..
Yahi line ho sakti thi:

Deewano sa bhatka hoon main bhi kisi ki khatir,
Awaaro.n ki tarah maine pyar kiya hai,

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Originally Posted by Fathomless View Post
woh anjuman mein hai mere pyar ki
apne awwal se badhkar maine use pyar kiya hai……….. !
Anjuman Mehfil ko kehte hain. "Woh mehfil mein hai mere pyar ki"... Samajh nahin aaya....

But know what, u have all the ingredients of a wonderful poet. Just keep up the gr8 work.. And keep writing and keep posting....


Regards,


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