Thread: about beh'r
View Single Post
Old
  (#333)
sameer'shaad'
~$uper M0der@tor~
sameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsameer'shaad' is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sameer'shaad''s Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 8,400
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 56
4th February 2013, 08:53 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Taish View Post
shaad saahab aapki is baat se maiN naitefaaqi rakhta huN, 'ze' pe katayi bhi zor kam nahin pada hai, aur yahaaN 1 ya 2 dono hi liye jaa sakte haiN, kyuNki 'ae' ki maatra aayegi, aur ye flexiblity allowed hai... rahi baat kam zor padne ki, to kyuNki izafat se do lafzoN ko jod jaata hai, to laazmi hai ki kisi bhi lafz ke beech meN aane wali aawaaz pe generally kam zor padta hai... Umeed hai ki aap baat ko samajh gaye hoNge...

Agree.........................................

Raaze-dil ka "ze" flexible lafz hai........... aap ise dono suuratoN me istemaal kar sakte haiN..

jahaaN tak maine aise lafzoN ka istemaal dekhaa hai hai, to amooman iise "e" lafz pe kamm wazan ke saath hi istemaal hota huaa hi dekhaa hai.... lekin hamesha hi aisaa ho , ye bhi zaruri nahi...

kuch sher aap sab ki khidmat me peshh karna chahunga.. jisme "e" ka wazn 1 hi hai...


Ek baat aur kehnaa chahungaaa ke in sheron ko kehne ka matlab katai ye nahi hai ke khud ko sahi ya kisi ko ghalat saabit karuN... bas chahataa hoon ke jo maine dekhaa wo sab ke sath share karuN.. aur shayari ke baare me hum sab jitna jaan sakeN.. utnaa behtar.....


Raaz’e Dil Kyaa Hai Aur Bayaan Hai Kiyaa
Gar Chupaa Sab Hai Phir Ayaan Hai Kiyaa

-unknown
(212)



Soz-e-gham de ke mujhe, us ne ye ershaad kiya
Jaa tujhe kashmakash-e-dehr se aazad kiya...
-JOsh Malihabadi..


(212)


pukaaratii hai Khaamoshii merii fugaa.N kii tarah
nigaahe.n kahataii hai.n sab raaz-e-dil zubaa.N kii tarah

jalaa ke daaG-e-muhabbat ne dil ko Khaak kiyaa
bahaar aa_ii mere baaG me.n Khizaa.N kii tarah

-Daag dehlavi


(212)



kyo.nkar huaa hai faash zamaane pe kyaa kahe.n
vo raaz-e-dil jo kah na sake raazadaa.N se ham

-Majaz


(212)




taskiin-e-dil-e-mahazuu na huii vo sa_ii-e-qaram faramaa bhii gaye
us sa_ii-e-qaram kaa kyaa kahiye bahalaa bhii gaye ta.Dapaa bhii gaye

aashuftagii-e-vahashat kii qasam hairat kii qasam hasarat kii qasam
ab aap kahe kuchhh yaa na kahe ham raaz-e-tabassum paa bhii gaye
-Majaz lknwi


(22112)



bas inhi sab ki wajah see maine yooN kahaa... lekin ye bhi maanta hoon ke hameshaa aisaa honaa laazmi nahii....

Shaad...


Shaad...

Last edited by sameer'shaad'; 4th February 2013 at 09:02 PM..
   
Reply With Quote