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21st April 2004, 08:45 PM

Doston bahut mazaa aa raha hai mehfil mein khoob rang lag raha hai...manoj ki shukriya khud ka kijiye agar aap itni khoobsurat sher se shuruwaat na karte to ghazal kaise muqammal hoti..lol

anish bhai aur sanjoo bahu shukriya aapko is ghazal ke har sher mein char chaand lagaane ke liye..

aage badhte huye yeh 6th sher:

dunia kisi ke pyaar mein jannat se kam nahin
dard-e-dil mohabbat mein raahat se kam nahin
-Manoj Kureel

aise bhi shaqs kuch hai, shiqwa-e-dil jinhe
jinke nazar ke moti, daulat se kam nahin
-Mast

aawaz sun kar unki khilte hai dil mein phool
mithaas us jabaan ki sharbat se kam nahin
-Manoj Kureel

nikla nahi bahar mai ke kisi pe aa gaya..
ye dil sa jo hai seene mai aafat se kam nahi !
-Anish_ekshayar

ruutha hai jab se woh meharBa jaanashii
de gaya sazaaye tanha jine kii maut se kam nahi..
-sanjoo

nazuk se khilte chehre pe kaise hai ‚zaab
halke se chuuke dekha paani se kam nahin

-mast
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