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2nd Sher -
27th April 2004, 10:01 AM
Manoj Ji Aadab!
"kuch alag rangat hai aaj in nazaaron mein
khile hai chahat ke phool aaj in baharon mein"
Wastav mein aapke sher ek nayi ummid , nayi tazgi bhar deta hai. Lekin aapse kehne ki muafi chahoonga ki Ghazal ki Beher ke hisab se isme zara si kami hai. Isse pehle ki koi aur isse Ghazal shuru kare, agar aapki izazat ho to main ise sahi karna chaahoonga..
Aur isme ek Sher bhi jodna chahoonga..
To bataiye kya humein Izazat hai??
----Gumnam
Take care to get what you like,
Or you will be forced to like what you get.
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