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Re: Aadab Manoj Ji - 27th April 2004, 10:43 AM

" Kuch alag-si rangat hai, Aaj in nazaaron mein,
Phool Khile Chahat Ke, Aaj in bahaaron mein"

gumnaam bhai
aapne ek dam todte hue sher ko apne hunar se jawan bana diya...bahoot khoob....jazbaaton ko chue bagair alfazon mein badlaav kar ke aapne is murjhaye phool ko mano mehka diya ho....kuch kuch waise hi jaise purani sharaab ko nai botal mil gayi ho....bahoot khoon...

2nd Sher Likha hai...

" Hal-e-dil hum kya kahen, kya aaj hai 'Gumnam' Ka,
Manzilon ki Chahat hai, Aaj in Kinaron mein."

aapka dusra sher bhi kaabeele tareef hai....hamari daad kubool kijiyte.....

3 sher hai...

har nishane se door dil kaid mein mehfooz tha
jameendoj hone ki khawish hai,aaj in deewaron mein


aapki rai ke intezaar mein ...

-Manoj Kureel


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