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26th March 2010, 10:22 PM
Bohat khoob Raj Saheb............par aapko ek sujhaav dena chahta hu........yeh sujhaav main isiliye de raha hu qke shuru shuru me main bhi kuch kuch aap jaisa hi likhta tha......
Aur jo badlaav maine apne andar mehsoos kiya aur jo baat maine samjhi aapse share karna chahta hu......
Aap jab koi kalam likhte hai to use poori tarah apne upar aadharit na kare isse soch mehdood ho jati hai........har baar apni sunane me kalam kamzor ho jata hai...
Sara zamana pada hai aapke samne kaiee mudde hai kaiee haqiqate hai kaiee jhooth hai un sab ko apni shayri me istemaal kijiye.........apne kalam ko apne se juda kar ke dekhiye ek baar phir dekhiye kitna maza aata hai......
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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