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27th March 2010, 07:00 AM

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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel View Post
Bohat khoob Raj Saheb............par aapko ek sujhaav dena chahta hu........yeh sujhaav main isiliye de raha hu qke shuru shuru me main bhi kuch kuch aap jaisa hi likhta tha......

Aur jo badlaav maine apne andar mehsoos kiya aur jo baat maine samjhi aapse share karna chahta hu......

Aap jab koi kalam likhte hai to use poori tarah apne upar aadharit na kare isse soch mehdood ho jati hai........har baar apni sunane me kalam kamzor ho jata hai...

Sara zamana pada hai aapke samne kaiee mudde hai kaiee haqiqate hai kaiee jhooth hai un sab ko apni shayri me istemaal kijiye.........apne kalam ko apne se juda kar ke dekhiye ek baar phir dekhiye kitna maza aata hai......
sajid_ghayel sahab aadaab
sabse pahle aapka dil se shukiya ada karugaN ki aapne meri koshish ko padha

maine aapke sujhav ko padha aur aage se mein aapki likhi baatoN pr dhayaan dugaN
aap sab se gujarish hai ke aap sab yuhiN mujhe rastaN dekha diya kareN
jisse main sahi rastoN pr chal sakuN

apna khayal rakheN
khush rahiyeN


maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!

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