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23rd June 2014, 01:14 PM
Aadaab bhaeeo, my draft couplet... I repeat D R A F T couplet.. just a suggestion.. please repair.. will be back after a few hours...Insha Allah!

Har ik gul kee tarha khiltee nahee ujaalaon mayn,
Karay mad-hosh ye shab, raat kee raani hai ye!

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