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26th June 2014, 10:09 AM

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Originally Posted by N@zneen View Post

Maine to ek sher post bhi kar di lekin ladkon ka hazma kharab hogaya
arrey! aapka sher achchha tha, Nazneen.. agar aapko lagtaa hai ki thoda zyada rumaanee ho gayaa hai toh dusra misra thoda change kar lo? vaise bhii tishnagi lafz beher men fit nahi baith rahaa hai

aur jaldi post karo.. aapka sher abhii bhii baaki hai...



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