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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Rohin,
Pehli Koshsish ke hisaab se dekhoon to tumhari ghazal behtreen lagi...Agar aaj ke Rohin ke nazar se dekhoon to Technically sound nahi hai....
Words.. As Always have been ur strength.. that can be see here 2... Mujhe to bahut achi lagi....
No need to say.. that u had those skills from the start
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Haan u are right its not technically sound and I am glad u told me abt it...
well I will correct the Ghazal in a more technically proficient way and then let me kow if i missed anything
thanks
Rohin