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manu - 5th March 2006, 10:46 PM

jhoothee taraaf kisee ne nahee keee tumhe achee nahee lagee mujeh is baat ka dukh nahee tum ne sab kee tareef ko jhootha kaha is baat pe aitaraz hai mujeh khud pasand hai meree ye ghazal aur mujeh napasand bhee hotee hai meree shayree bahut baar is ghazal ko parhte hee kunal ka phone aya tha mere pas tareef ke liye woh phone jhooth nahee tha tum agar usee roh se parhte jis rooh se maien likha to achha lagata tumhe bhee agar nahee parh sake to bhee mujhe marg darshan milta hai par tareef ko jhooth na kaho nahee to shayed mujeh sab jhooth lagane lage aur main remarks parhne band kar doon mujhe bahut sakht aitarz hai is baat se ki jhoothee tareef na ye baat galat kah dee tum ne

tumahree agar kamee nikalana sachha hai to un kee tareef bhee mujeh pata hai tum mujeh bahut dil se parhte ho aur jo dil kahata hai wahee batate hai tabhee maine tumhre pm main bahut pyar se kaha tha ke agar ache enahee lagee to koyee baat nahee lekin jinhone ise achha bataya un se poochana unhone jhooth kaha tha? agar haan to main unhe rok doonnga remarks dene se mujeh jhooth nahee chahiye main bhee janana chahta hoon meree kamiya par kisee aur kee taraf ko jhooth nahee kaho na aaj ye baat tumne shayron walee nahee kee mera wihswas dadmaga diya sach main jhoothee tareef bhee kar dete hain log? meree shayree pe kam hee log ate hain aur main dobara alag se poochata hoon un se ke kaheen tareef mujeh khush karane ke liye to nahee kee ? mujhe feed back milta rahata hai main khud jana chahat hoon maien kya galat kaha meree shayree ko kam galat chota kah lo par mehul farhana ashu in sab ke lafzon ko kam na kaho tum ne sach kaha hai tumhe achah nahee laga agar nahe elaga to shayree main kamee hai sab ko na achee lage to shayree kaisee par samjho kya chubh gaya mujhe plz samjho
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mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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