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21st November 2011, 11:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hassan View Post
Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai


Anamika Jii,,

Sab se phele to arz karna chahooN ga,
k aap ko yahan dekh kar be-had khushi huii,,
aur apni ankhooN per yakeen nahi aaya..
aik acha faisla hai yeh ..... yahan aap ko boht kuch seekhne
ko aur sikhaanay ko milay ga....

Aatay hain ghazal ki taraf... to hamesha ki tarah yeh ghazal bhi
Aap ki lajawaab hai... tareef k liye lafz dhoondhne pad jatay hain
aksar aap ki ghazal ko sarhaanay k liye..... tamaam ghazal
be-had khoobsorat aur dard se libraiz hai... quoted verse kuch ziyada hi
pasand aaye...

Aatay rahiye aur mehfil sajaatay rahiye,,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath ijaaza,

Aap ka,
Hassan ji.....

aapse kya kahun ab main... itni tareef kar dete hain aap k kuch sujhta hi nahin kabhi jawab me...... aapne pasand kiya mera likha ...apna waqt diya saraha .. aur itne pyaar se welcome kiya yahan.....

sach yahan aakar sabko padhkar bht kuch sikhne mila hai mujhe ... ab koshihs karungi k ise sahi roop de sakun....

dil se shukriya kubul kijiye ji......

*AnAmikA*



Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..


   
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