Quote:
Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Is ghazal ke naseeb me anjaam nahi hai shayad..
Mujahid sahab aapse request hai aap ek nayi behr dekar nayi ghazal ka agaaz karein.
Jisse ruki huyi mahfil me rawani aaye..
Shukriya..
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu
Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge
Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai
BEHR-E-MUJTAS:
Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
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Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Matla:
Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)