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11th October 2002, 09:03 AM

Feroz jee:

vaise to aapki kahi har ghazal dil choo leti hai lekin yeh zara hat ke thii. Itni mukhtsar bahr mein kehne waala andaaz bahut achchaa laga. Yuun lagta hai jaise is andaaz ne ghazal ko ek masoomiyat si de di, jaise kise chote bache ke chehre pe nazar aati hai. Yakeen maaniye, ghazal bahut hi dilnasheen aur pyaari lagi.

Khaas kar ke yeh do sher bahut pasand aaye

phir se chchalko
tum saaGhar ho
wah! kitne kam lafzoN mein kitni badi baat keh di

pighal bhii jao!
kyaa paththar ho?
is andaaz-e-shikaayat ke to kya kehne!

Khuda kare aapke qalaam paDne ko milta rahe.

Rab rakhaa


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