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The Lost Poet
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8th May 2009, 10:28 AM
Buland bhai, apne is nacheez ki tareef kari, apka bahut bahut shukriya.....
is poem ka shrey meri didi ko jaata hai, woh hai hi itni acchi ki, meri jagah koi aur bhi bhai hota, toh woh bhi aisi kavita unke liye likh jaata.......
tareef ke liye phir se shukriya
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Originally Posted by Buland Shayar
Guddu ji 1st of all thanx 4 ur precious time,whch u spent on my request... 
sach me maine bhai behan k pyaar k upar likhi ye pehli poem padhi hai, wakai kunaal ji ne sahi kaha, is rachna ko tareef k lafzo se nahi tola ja sakta...
Aapke ehsaas bahut he khoobsoorat hain...
Aapki poem ko padh k lagta hai k aapki Pari didi aur Aap dono he khushnaseeb ho...
Shayad aapki pari didi aapse badi hain,
meri b 2 behan hai lekin mujhse choti hain...
Kaash meri b koi badi didi hoti aapke jaisi...
To mai aapki poem chura k unko dedicate kar deta 
neways Thanx again bhai... |
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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