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13th July 2014, 03:22 PM

[QUOTE=zidd;461796]


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Ho gaye hum ek pal me khaak-bos
Aakpi nazroN ne kya bosa diya [ ! or ? ]

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Zidd sahab ke is sher se seekhne ka ek aur nukta milta hai .... yahaaN jumla "khaak-bos" ka istemaal kiya gaya hai, which means "one that is kissing the dust". aise aur bhi jumle haiN jahaaN "bos" ko lafz ke aakhir meiN (as suffix) rakh kar jumla bana hai. examples are "pa-bos" which means "one that is kissing the feet" ya "aasmaaN-bos" ya "one that is kissing the feet". Members se request haiN ki jo "bos" as suffix par aur roshni daal sakte haiN, wo apni raay se nawaazeiN.

is sher meiN misra-e-oola meiN "bos" aur misra-e-saanee meiN "bosa" ka istemaal kar ke Zidd sahab ne waaqayee "fusoon-e-alfaaz" paida kiya hai


safar ki daastaaN kehte agar manzil koyee paate
chalo kisse suna dete haiN kuchh pairoN ke chhaaloN ke

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