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14th July 2014, 10:43 PM

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ek taaza sher bas abhi abhi kaha hai, so us par bina ghaur kiye ya bina taraashe, yahaaN par waisa ka waisa pesh raha hooN ... delivered fresh


bosa shabnam ka phool ke rukh par
sub'he dam yaad aa gaya koyee

- zarraa
doston, kyunki ye seekhne ki mehfil hai, aur kyunki yahaan sab apne hi hain, is liye zehmat de raha hoon. oopar waale sher ka ek alternative version kaha hai ......

bose booNdoN ke barg-e-gul par nam
yaad saawan meiN aa gaya koyee


aap ki raay mil jaaye is par, in absolute terms aur pichhle version ke comparison mein, to mujhe kuchh seekhne ko milega. shukriya.


safar ki daastaaN kehte agar manzil koyee paate
chalo kisse suna dete haiN kuchh pairoN ke chhaaloN ke

-zarraa
   
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