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Originally Posted by acharya_mj
janaab mujhe lagta hai ap ko koi ghalatfaimii hui hai
aap ne likha hai "ham dono" premi, plz dhukaa mat khaaiyega yeh sirf game hai,ok ise game hee rehne deeji ye to jyada achaa hai,
aur yeh meri ghazal intelligent and mature friend lamha ke liye
"Kabhi yoon bhi aa meri aankh mein k meri nazar ko Khabar na ho
Mujhe aik "lamha" navaz de magar uske baad sehar na ho
Woh bara rahim-o-karim hai mujhe ye sifat bhi ataa kare
Tujhe bhoolne ki dua karoon to dua mein meri asar na ho
Mere bazuon men thaki thaki , abhi mahav-e-Khvab hai "lamha"
Na uThe sitaron ki palaki, abhi ahaTon ka guzar na ho
Kabhi dhoop de, kabhi badaliyan, dil-o-jaN se donon qubool hain
Agar us "lamhe" men na qaid kar jahan zindagi ka Guzar na ho
Kabhi din ki dhoop men jhum ke kabhi shab ke phool ko chum ke
Yoon hi "lamha" sath chalen sada kabhi Khatm apana safar na ho
Mere paas mere habib aa , zara aur dil ke qareeb aa
Tujhe dharkane bana lu main k bichharne ka kabhi Dar na ho
Hai chasm-e-baddur tu, apni aankho mai saja lu tujhe,
Khwaabo par mere lamha teri yaado ka Qahar na ho
Aa Ruh mai bas ja meri, ,apne aksh mai lamhabharchhupa lu tujhe
Fir chahe gujroo teri rahgujar se to lamha tanha meri dagar na ho
Tere aansu ka samandar pi gaya , yaado ke sahaare ji gaya,
Ab is dil ki muhobbat maar sake aisa koi zahar na ho
Jo baat maine kahi thi kabhi,ke tu is dil mai rahi thi kabhi.
Vo dil-e-jazbaat ka sanam gam mujhe umrabhar na ho.
Lamha ji aap jaroor bataye ap ko yeh ghazal kaisee lagi
regards
manu
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BAHUT KHUB.....MANU,
i hope ab ye post pe koi galat fehmi na ho..........plz har koi is baat ko thik se samaj le ki ye wakehi ek game hai aur use game hi rehne de..........kisi ka bhi naam na uchale,taki koi bina wajah badnaam na ho jaye.............i hope mere sabhi doston ko ye baat samaj aagayi hogi...............thanx...............
MANU aap ne bahut hi pyaari ghazal pesh ki hai..........achi lagi...............shayad is ghazal ka jawaab dene ke liye mai itni expert nahi hoo.............