4th February 2013, 04:35 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by kshitiz
Bahut achhe zainy saahiba ..
Aapki ghazal bahut achhi ..ishq se sarabor hai
Mera khyaal se ishq pe likhna aapko shuruaat se hi pasand hai
Sarsari taur pe Chautha sher beher se khaarij hai
Isko durust kar leiN
Baaki baateiN itminaan se hoti rahengi
Daad haazir hai
Qubool farmaaeiN
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Ghazal per aane ka shukriyah kshitiz ji...per pls puri baat tou bata dijiye...
ke kahaaN maine mistake KI..taaki durust kar sakuN..
4th sher
Na1 che2da2 ka1ro2 ap2ni1 aan2khoN2 se1 hum2ko2
Ga1ye2 jaa2N1 se2 hum2 , a1daa2 hai2 tu1mha2ari2
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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