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4th February 2013, 04:35 PM

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Originally Posted by kshitiz View Post
Bahut achhe zainy saahiba ..

Aapki ghazal bahut achhi ..ishq se sarabor hai

Mera khyaal se ishq pe likhna aapko shuruaat se hi pasand hai

Sarsari taur pe Chautha sher beher se khaarij hai

Isko durust kar leiN

Baaki baateiN itminaan se hoti rahengi

Daad haazir hai

Qubool farmaaeiN
Ghazal per aane ka shukriyah kshitiz ji...per pls puri baat tou bata dijiye...

ke kahaaN maine mistake KI..taaki durust kar sakuN..

4th sher


Na1 che2da2 ka1ro2 ap2ni1 aan2khoN2 se1 hum2ko2
Ga1ye2 jaa2N1 se2 hum2 , a1daa2 hai2 tu1mha2ari2




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