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great!!! - 29th March 2007, 12:59 PM

sony jee asalaam walekum ,

kaisi haiN aap?

aaj to bahot hi khusHii hui aapki is behtrin si nazm ko paRH ke ..har baar aap apni kosisH ko aur bhi behtrin banaane me kamyaab hoti jaa rahi hai ye baat mujhe baRii achHii lagi ..ye nazm meiN aapne jo apne dil ke un ehsaasoN ko pesH kiyaa hai wo andaaz-e-bayaaN baRaa achHaa raha ..khas karke har lafzoN ko aapne sahi tarike se use pesH kiye haiN jahaaN unki zaroort hai wahaaN .isiliye kosisH ki khoobsoorti aur bhi baRH jaati hai..


Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye...wah wah!

bhul gaye hain,Ab yeh bhi,
kya_kya humne manga tha,
Mohabbat se Nafrat itni thi,
ke khuwahish karNa,Bhul gAye...wah wah




dua karta huN aap aise hi aage baRHte raheN aur aage isse bhi behtrin kosisH likheN taaki hum bhi aapse kuch seeKH sakeN ..

ehsaasoN se bhari behtrin kosisH ke liye daad ko kubul kijiyenGa

apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

aapka dost
dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...

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