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31st December 2009, 03:03 PM

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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 View Post
Sameer Ji...bahut khub ! aapne mohabbat ke ehsaason ko badi maasoomiyat ke saath nazm mai pesh kiya hai.....sabhi panktiya dil ko chhuti hai....yuhi likhte rahiye.....
aakhir ki sabhi panktiya mujhe bahut pasand aai.....
kahan maza fakhat baatoN mein hai
Kya maza hijar ki raatoN mein hai
Din mein tujhe bhi khumaar chaya hoga
Palke mund tune din ko raat banaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Shiddat e mohobbat ki tasir to hai
zubaan bhi ek badi shamshir to hai
tune kisi aur ka naam lena chaha
Zubaan per mera naam aaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

dil se daad hazir hai....kabul farmaaye....
apna khayal rakhiye...
duaaon ke saath.....
Naresh jee Aadaab..........

Yeh to aapki chaha hai ke aapko humaa likha kuch bhi pasand aa jata hai........
Aur humare liye yeh khush kismati ki baa hai ke aapke jaise dost bhi humari kismat mein hai

Waise maine yeh pui kalam yahan baithe bahithe hi likhi hai isliye main khud isse jyada kareeb se padha nahi aur soch nahi ke kya likha maine.........

Per aapki zaa nawazi ne hume yahan jhakne ko majoor kar diyaa......


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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 View Post
" Dua Nahi To Gila Deta Koi

Meri Wafaon Ka Sila Deta Koi
Jab Muquddar Hi Nahi Tha Apna

Deta Bhi To Kya Deta Koi.... "
Main aapka tahe dil se shuka guzar huN......... Aur aapka yeh sher behad pyara laga mujhe aur beshak bahut sahin kaha hai is sher mein "Deta bhi to kya deta koi........"

ISi sher se juda mera aagazi kalam hai..........

Dil ke ghamoN ko tanhai ki khizaa naa dey
De mujhe saza magar tu bad-duaa naa dey


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