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20th June 2014, 11:54 AM
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Zidd saab, mujhe toh kafiye ka wazn sahi lag rahaa hai
hai(1) cha(1)man(2) un(2)se(1) hi(1) ro(2)shan(2) hai(1) ye(1) meh(2)fil(2) bhii(1) ja(1)waaN(2),
ye(1) ka(1)rish(2)ma(2) hai(1) ki(1) phir(2) un(2)ki(1) ta(1)waa(2)ni(2) hai(2) ye(2).

vaise aap chaahe toh iise change kar sakte haiN, hameN koii aitraaz nahi
bhai lafz 'tawaani' hai ya 'taawaani'...ye dekhiye pahle aap
   
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