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15th July 2015, 06:44 PM

Madhu ji bahaut khoob likha hai aapne...I am a fan of your writing...yeh lines kuch jyada hi pasand aayin...

baaNt na paya khushi jo meri
gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya.

kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha
aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya.

Aise hi likhti rahiye...khayal rakhiye.


Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...
   
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