4th September 2014, 10:05 AM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
waaaah Raina jee bohat khoob...
khushbu kyuN na aaye gi meri baatoN mere yaar!
aaj kal mera uthna bethna pholooN ke sung jo hai....
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shayaraina
Good morning ans Thank you Hassan Bhai...Kya khoob kehtein aap aap..Masha Allah..
Aaj phir pehley saa hojaaney ko dil karta hai)
Phir teri baahon mein sojaaney ko dil karta hai...
(SR)c&p
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thankyou Raina jee and wahhh khoob sher kaha hai..
but mere sher meiN aik lafz chhoot gaya tha:-
khushbu kyuN na aaye gi meri baatoN se mere yaar!
aaj kal mera uthna bethna pholooN ke sung jo hai....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
Last edited by Hassan; 4th September 2014 at 10:07 AM..
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