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Originally Posted by zarraa
wwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhh !!!!!!!!! ek khoobsurat tasweer ke jaisa ye sher .... wo tasweer jo is aalam ke canvass par banayee gayee ho !! is sher meiN ek azmat hai, ek gehraayee hai, ek sukoon hai, ek bandagi hai !!!
Bahaut si daad aap ko Zainy ji !! Aur haaN lafz ka bhi kya khoob istemaal kiya aap ne!!
(just a very small point, kyuNki aapne "n" aur "N" ka farq zaahir kiya hai, to behr ke mutaabiq "aasmaan" meiN "N" lagna chaahiye mere hisaab se. lagta hai typing error ho gayi hai ya computer ke auto-correct feature ne behr ki nazaakat ko nazar andaaz kar diya  there should be a shayari mode in operating systems as well ) |
bohat bohat shukriyah zarraa sahab. ..
it was again a typo.
. ..corrected anyway....