Quote:
Originally Posted by tilakji
Bahut khoob likhiya hai Sunita ji. Your poetry is maturing up day by day. It's beautifull. Ik gustaakhi kar rihaaN tuhadi aakhri line naal....
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
Eh agar is tarah hovey.....
hun koi v sukhan usda mere naam hona nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
Wasdey raho
tilak...
|
tilak ji namaskaar...........tusi bahut dhayaan naal padiya hai meri shayri nu....dil to shukriya
te tuhadi gustaakhi menu bahut vadiya lagi.....
aida hi saath dende rahna
kush raho te kushiya maande raho