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13th July 2014, 09:02 PM

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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' View Post
gyaan ji aapki shaayri ka mureed ho gayaa.... waahh kyaa ter jaise alfaaz likhte hain ... subhan allaah....

aur jo is baar gaur kiyaa to lahzaa behad rawaan dawaan thaa... kuch misre me behr toot gayee magar its acceptable at this phase.... mei guzaarish hai ke aap aage se aur bhi dhyaan dijiye rawaani mein.... sone pe suhaaga ho jaaega

likhte raheN... apna kahyaal rakkhen

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