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Re: Me and the rain - 30th January 2005, 01:37 PM

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Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Everyone,

We have a very notable Shayar with us "dard_thesorrow"
In his signature i found a line which just touched my hart, that line is:

"I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying"

I was sitting alone remembering my old days and slowly this line turned into a poem for me, which I am going to post here.
I hope he likes it and so do all of you.

Dard_thesorrow ji if you do not like my poetry do let me know for the inspiration is from u.

Me and the rain

On a rainy morning
When the sun was hiding
I was out in the open
Drenched from top to bottom

My love had asked me to meet
Our usual place in the field
Behind the wind mill
Under the cedar tree

It was a lovely place
Near the quiet lake
Where the lovebirds met
When the sun is about to set

But nobody was there today
Just the rain and me
Been waiting the whole day
but she had never been late

Then She came running
i reached out and pulled her to me
She was breathing heavily
Her eyes were watery

She then moved away
And opened her wet hands
She gave me the chain
I gave her on our first date

I looked in her eyes
And she looked in mine
I understood what she didn't say
She realised, turned, ran away

I stood there for hours
Holding my hart in my hand
I didn't know how to cry
For with her I always smiled

I thank god it rained
Oh I just love the rain
for It hid my tears,
It hid my pain

That day that rain
those tears and that pain
The rain stopped then
but in my eyes it still rains

Thanks
Rohin

Rohin, Dard, and everybody else on this post. I am doing my usual, giving Rohin's words my Hindustaani treatment. Hope you all like it.


Us Din Subh baarisH huii tHii, Baaadal mein Aftaab cHHupaa thaa
Main baahar boondoN ke niiche, sar-se-paaoN tak giila thaa

Wahan pawanchakki ke piichHe, door chinaaroN ke niiche
Mere mehbuub ne mujhse, usii jagah milne ko bolaa thaa

Ek KHamosh jheel kinaare, woh pyaari sii jagah yahiiN thii
Jahan parinde pyaar karte the, jab suraj duubne ko hota thaa

Par aaj wahan sannata tha, bas baarish thi, aur main thaa
Din saara kaisa biit gayaa, woh der se to nahin aataa thaa

Aur phir wo dauDii aayee thii, dhamak ke mere baahon meiN
Phuulii phuulii si saansein thii, aankNoN meiN ek dariyaa thaa

Aur alag huyii, duur haTi, phir kholaa bhiiNge haantHoN ko
Aur boli le lo haar, jo pehli mulaqaat par maine diyaa tha

Maine dekHa uski aankHon, meri aakhoN mein usne dekHaa
Iske pehle woh lauTi thii, uskii aankhon ne kuchh bolaa thaa

Phir ghantoN wahiN khaDa rahaa, dil thaame apne haatHoN se
Main ro bhi nahiN sakta tha, sohbat mein sada muskaaya tha

Aur abre-karam thii, barsaa tha, baarish se thaa ab pyaar mujhe
BoondoN ne aansoo dhoye the, aur mera dard chHupayaa tha

Woh tha ek din, woh abr bhi thii, woh aansoo, aur woh dard
AankhoN mein ab bhi baras raha, paani jo us din barsaa thaa

Thanks
Kamakaze


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