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Mujahid Ali
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27th August 2016, 10:49 AM

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Originally Posted by sabaa kiyani View Post
mujahid saheb aasan si beher ar asaar dia karen hamkoh itni mushkil beher samjh nahi aati :conf used:
Mohtarma saba ji

Aap behr ki istilaahi naam se bilkul confused mat hoiye

Mai jab bhi koi nayi ghazal pesh karta hu koshish karta har baar alag behr ka istamaal karu

Ye bohat maqbool behr hai jiss mai kaafi mashoor ghazle likhe hai shaurao ne

Misaal ke taur par

1) Har ik baat pe kehte ho tum ke tu kya hai
Tumhi kaho ke ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai (MIRZA GHALIB)

2) Gulo mai rang bharey baad-e-nau-bahaar chaley
Chaley bhi aao ke gulshan ka karobaar chaley (FAIZ AHMED FAIZ)

3) Kabhi kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aata hai (SAHIR LUDHIANVI)

Aap arkaan aur uss ke vazn pe hi dhyaan dijiye

Aap jaise ba-kamaal shaiera zaroor achha likh sakenge

Maine iss liye urdu aur roman mai dono mai arkaan likh diye sab ki aasaani ke liye
   
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