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Originally Posted by janumanu
Bhayee pahli try hai .... yun to thread bahut pahle banbaa diya tha ........
shaam ko saath mais ahi ki thi par fir ulajh gaya ........
yaha pe hi seekhna sahi rahega ...........
zara dekhyeN ise
saans aayee aansu aaye rab yaad aaya
aap yaad aye to sab yaad aaya
jab bhi milne ki dili khwaahish ki
fir bichdne ka sabab yaad aaya
soch maiN hun ki tujhe dekha hai
aainaa hia tu mera ab yaad aaya
tujhpe jo dekhi khuda ki mehr
apna bhi dast-e-talab yaad aaya
geeli geeli hia meri aankheN kyuN
aaj din bhar tu kab yaad aaya
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apka qafiya aisa hai ki ye ghazal 'tumko dekha' wale meter me nahi aa sakti
isse milta julta ek meter hai...usme apki kai lines chali gai hai
dhun hai......
dil dhadakne ka sabab yaad aaya( youtube par mil jayegi)
iski taktee hai
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apka
phir bichadne ka sabab yaad aaya..bilkul sahi hai
apki kai lines is beher me already hai
aap poori ghazal is dhun aur is taktee par dhaalne ki koshish kijiye
ek try aur ho jaaye...aap bahut kareeb hai