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24th March 2008, 05:08 PM

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Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........


De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,

si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,

kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,

usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,

vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,

hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya

SUNITA JI sachmuch bahut hi khoobsurat likheya hai tusi.jo tusi likhde ho oh aapne aap ch sampuran hunda hai.thx eni pyari rachna lai.

Babbu ji tuhada v dil to shukriya, jo tusi menu aine pyar naal padiya, te es adna jehi kavish te aina sanmaan bakshiya.

god bless u


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