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16th May 2007, 05:36 AM

namakar sony g,

wow, bahut khub likha hai apne. abb tareef karein to kaise karein. dil ko chu liya apne. bahut najuk hai yhe ehsaas dil ke. humein bahut ache lage. gayal kar diya apne. aapke yhe sher to humein bahut acha laga:

Mann ke in,Registano me,
baghicha,pyar ka banana tha,
yakin me Milawat itni thi,
ke koshish karna,Bhul gAye.


daad haajir hai hazuur kabul kijiye. app aise hi likthe rahein.

tc

manish


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
just
one drop at a time....

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