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20th October 2005, 08:09 PM
well...happy endin from your prospective...
hmm...its wonderful...and u made me cry today...
its jus a wonderful novel...
well....i thought u would giv a mesg or two at the end...i mean...
normally u do....but this time u dint...
add some thin ...at the end...to make the readers agree with ur point tht its a happy endin...if i'm nt wrong...
coz u often say
all love stories hav a happy endin....its jus the way u look at it
start a nother one quickly...okk
take care bhai
Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...
Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun
I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
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