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12th September 2018, 12:11 PM
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Originally Posted by maikasH View Post
raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar


aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN

maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN


tasleem* = Accept

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wahhhhhh....Maikash ji, aapke to 2 misre hi poori gazal barabar lagte haiN, bahut khoob likha hai "maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN" wahhhh.

poori gazal bhi jaldi pesh kijiye...intejaar hai besabri se.


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