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Love 7th July 2014, 02:25 PM
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Originally Posted by zarraa View Post
Waise fixing ki aisi bahaut ziyada zaroorat naheen hai, and I may not be the best fixer (mujhe khud fixing ki zaroorat padti rehti hai ) ... but I might have tried variations like (may not be in the meter you may have in mind) ... "panaah mili n koyee to maaNgee saza rasan o daar se" ya "ho ke majboor maNg baithe saza rasan o daar se" ...

Lekin chhorhiye in nuktoN ko, yahaaN maqsad hai diye gaye jumle par ghaur karne ka hai, jis ko aap ne bahaut achchhee tarah grasp kar liya hai ... to mubaarakbad aap ko
shukriya zarraa sahab.......

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