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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
Meri mohabbat meri zindigi ki ek pehchan hai.......
mujhe apni jaan-e-jaan pe abhimaan hai.......
kabhi roshni hun shaam ke kabhi tanhai main tere saath hun
tum jahan bhi ho humesha roshan karegi tumhare zindegi ....Diya_Jale |
Dear Diya ,Apko shayri ka shokh hai lekin shairy ke liye Urdu zabaan janna bahot zaroori hai,jaise intezar thi ki jagha kaho intezar tha,sayri ki jagha kaho shayri, then only you can become a good shaira. i hope you don,t mind.
Aap meri ghazal ki radeef hain, Qafiya badalta rehta hai radeef nahin badalti....................ek aur sher malaheza farmayen..........
Honton se tu pilaye main peeta rahun sharab
Bujhne na paaye, pyaas ka aisa diya jale..........