Bismil sahab AadaaB!
Janab hum to khairiyat se hai ... aap bhi achche hoge yehi ummid.... 
Sameer bhai aadaab,
Kaise haiN aap? bade dinoeN baad aapke darshan hue hai..umeed hai khairiyat se honge
pehle to yeh kahunga ki yeh aapki sabse achi rachna hai..bahot khoob..god bless..yunhi likhte rahiye..
Janab aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa ke is kalaam ko itni tareef ke kabil samjha aapne........
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Originally Posted by
kwahish 
HUm SitaaRe Ko NiSHaaN banaYe baithe hai
Dil ki hasrat ko hum JaaN banaye baithe hai
sahab donoeN baatein sahi hai...judi hui nahi hai..matla aur behtar ho sakta tha kyunki aapka radeef zabardast hai
Hmmm Bismil sahab aapki baat sahiN hai per maiN apna clearification bhi de duN..... YahaaN sitara meaN aasmaa ka sitara nahi hai.... woh sitara hai jo duniyaa ki bulandiyoN per chamak raha hai.... aur hum uski hasrat kar baithe jise hum paa hi nahi sakte ..... Ab sidhe se kahuN to
YeH DiL BeSaBRa Hai JaWaab -E- TaLab Unke
Woh khamoshi ko zubaaN banaye baithe hai
besabra (impatient) aur talab (desire, wish)..this heart is impatient for the desire of an answer from her..thoda aur aasaan yeh hota ki heart is impatient for an answer from her..or the heart desires an answer from her..not both the things together..
doosra misra zabardast hai
Hmmm yahaaN kuch maiN bhi confuse hua huN shayad meri kamzor Urdu ka asar hai..... 
tamaam ghazal hi purjosh...jasbaatoen se labrez rahi...jo baatein maine rakhi hai uska aap bura nahi lagaaenge yeh jaanta hun maY to maufi nahi maang raha..
aapka dost,
Pradhyuman
Bismil sahab aap mere SDC ke un dostoN meiN se hai jo yahaaN ke mere sabse kareebi dost hai.......... Aapki baaton ka agar bura maan jauNga to phir dosti aur humari samjhdari kis kamki........
Jee aapne muafi mang kar mujhe sharminda nahi kiya iske liye maiN aapka shukra guzaar huN......
Apna khayaal rakhiye
Khuda Hafez.....