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11th April 2004, 07:03 AM

Sanjoo,

gar tumne kasam todh hee dee thee yahan aane kee...tau kuch likh bhi dete na...yeh ghazal aur aage badhati...kya harj hai...itni akkad achi nahin ok...chupchaap wapis aao aur likh do kuch...samjhe...

Aur kshitiz...

aap yahaan aaye hamein itni khushi huyi...fir gustaakhi yaah muaafi ki baat na karein tau achha rahega...aapne sher bhi bahut umda kaha hai...aage bhi shirkat kijieygaa...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan

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