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21st May 2010, 11:59 PM

As salam walekum
Mohtarma aapne badi dilkash kalaam se hume ruberu karwaya...
Masha Allah behad dil fareb khayaal hai is kalaam ke.... But in my mind it's incomplite gazal..... I don't know about it, it's complite or incomplite.....
but my mind say's it's uncomplite........ Plz don't mind I m just saying Im not sure .. take care Allah Hafez.............


Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti

Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga
Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti

   
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