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24th June 2014, 02:57 PM
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Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi View Post
Aadaab bhaeeo wa behno... sorry jaldee mayn boo boo hogaya... kal... bay-bahr shayr post kar diya.. but anyways.. am trying my best to move forward with you guys.. hoping it would continue the process ..yielding more knowledge on us seekers..... please help in moving ahead...



please help choose which one to go ahead with...


Main huN jaaNbaaz karuN jaan kii kyuN mayN parwah,
Ki meri jaan, meri jaan to jaanee haye ye!

or

Nahi maamooli koee gul jo din mayn khil jaaye
Karay mad-hosh ye shab raat ki raanee haye ye!


Please do not hesitate to express your opinions/views etc...


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Ahmad
Bahot khoob Ahmadji dono hi sher bahot khoobsurat hain

Waise kamaal hai yahan humse ek sher nahin ban rahi aapne do-do bana diye.......

@Zidd sogae ho kya ghazal puri hone ayi hai aur tumhara kuch ata pata nahin hai
   
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