View Single Post
Old
  (#17)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,158
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 58
26th July 2008, 09:22 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by prasad.kulkarni View Post
Koii do mast aanKho.N me.N ham bhi Khogaye the
Woh kyaa zamaana thaa ki aashiq ham bhi hogaye the
Guruur-e-husn unko bhi thaa, shaq-e-sitam woh bhi raKhte the
Hame.N Khushio.N se hochuki thi nafrat, unke gham bhaagaye the

Hello friends! I am new here and those are the line I wrote just for this thread. My Urdu is not very good since I never studied it formally. I listen to Ghazals and try learning Urdu through them. Do let me know if I make mistakes and help me improve my Urdu.

-Prasad

welcome kulkarni ji.....aapne bahut accha sher likha hai....hume pasand aaya


"yoon to rahti hai tasavur mein unki surat,
magar mil jayeN to taskeen si ho jati hai"

_NM


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote