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30th July 2004, 06:06 PM
Bhai maafi chahata hoo
information aap ne jo di hain wo elementry level ki hai
main koi shayar nahi hoon
bas urdu adab main thoda sa is bachhe ka bhi naam hain
kahene ko kai majue likhe hain humne
waise jis tareekhe se aap ne information de hain wo khabil-e-tareef hain
presentation achha hain
ghazal or rubait ka sab se bada diff. jo hota hain wo sama ka hota hain
ghazal main sama nahi banta hain
PUS badalta rahta hain har sher main
rubait main conti. chalta hain
agar aap ne meer anis or dabeer ke kaseede pade hunge
ya firaag sahab ki shayari
ya galib ki (waise unki palle nahi padti hain shayari coz aadhi se zaada wo farsi use karte the urdu ki jagha)
sab ka apna apna alag dhang tha
par aaj tak silsila wahi chala aa raha hain jo sadiyon se chalta aa raha hain
sab ne bola yahi
par jab likhne ki baari aayi to kisi ne bhi 1 bhi mukammal ghazal nahi likhi
sab ne sama bandh diya tha
bhai hum to kahte hain ki
jo sunne main achha lage wo ghazal hain
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