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Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan View Post
Shukriyana adaaygii bahoot achhi rahi...socha aapke iss qalaam per dii gayii tippani par ek nazer daali jaaye toh paya aapne kaafi der baad apni qalam ko majboor kiya kutchh likhne ko.. ...lekin jo bhi likha uske liye yahi kahooNga ke hamaare lafzoN se nahiN aapko tehreer me bahoot kutchh chhipa hai jo reader samajh sakta hai.....apne sahi farmaya ek jagah..ke ahsaasoN ke aage..technicalities kai baar pheeki paRh jaati haiN.....
Aapki iss Ghazal ka matla hi mujhe kheench ker dubara iss mehfil me le aya....

daikha nahi hai usko magar jaanti hun main
qadmoN ki aahatoN se pehchaanti hun main

sach kahooN toh rashq hone laga hai ......kitna dumm hai isme...is sher ke bhaaNvoN me...our .kai baar socha iss per kutchh likhoN......isi matle ko kai mukhtalif lafz diye hamne....inhi linoN ko kai martaba naya jaama pehnaya...ek toh yuN raha...

Dekha nahi hai usko magar jaanti hun main
Aahat uske qadmoN ki pehchaanti hun main

or

Dekha nahiN hai tujhko magar jaanti hooN maiN
Aahat Tere qadmoN ki pehchaanti hooN maiN

isse anyatha na leiN..bas yuNhi likh diye.....bahoot hi oomda bhaav liye hue aapka tmaam qalaam baar baar padne ko jee chaha....
our yaqeenan aane waale waqt meiN aap shayri.com per aapke funn ka koi saani na hoga.....likhte rahiyega....God bless you


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Harash

Harash ji,

mai aapka jitna bhi shukriya adaa karu utna hi kam hai..... aapne yakeenan is naacheez ko bahut zayada izzat bakshi hai... aap ka yaha dobara aana mere liye khushi ka sabab hai... yuhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega.... hamesha khush rahiye....


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