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30th April 2010, 04:14 PM

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Originally Posted by janumanu View Post
yaha to 14/13 ho raha hai ...


jaa/ti hu/i lad/ki ko ba/ta de/na cha/hi/ye
zidd cha/lu lad/ki ko ba/cha le/na cha/hi/ye

ab ispe kuch torch mareN
torch to maar du...bus ye dekh lijiye ki kahi ladki ne nylon ka kuch to nahi pahna hai..........

waise 14=13 hi hai.maine padte hue dono lineno me mann me 'ye' laga diya na jaane kyu.....15=14 nahi.....par baat to wahi par ataki hai...wazn badakar aaoo saani ka
   
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