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Really Gr8! - 25th January 2005, 07:27 PM

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Originally posted by jasleen
hi friends.
sumone encouraged me to right sumthing on sum gloden periods in my life which i really cherish.well hope u all love reading it.

Whenever life brings me into your company...
the earth appears more clearly to me than the moon...
The fragrance of crimson flowers rises along the paths of my heart...
As the day draws to an end, your voice calls to me...
and the earth appears more clearly to me than the moon.
Sometimes the memory of you claps sharply; sometimes it whispers...
Every day, the last watch of the night awakens me...
and the earth appears more clearly to me than the moon.
Why is separation the outcome of every meeting?
This matter now torments me constantly...
and the earth appears more clearly to me than the moon
whenever life brings me into your company.


Hey Jasleen,

How r u?

I knew it that u have a gr8 potential to be a great writer and that too a versatile writer.You are really doing a gr8 job jasleen
seriously give a thought to ur mind and u'll get the answer that how good u have written this composition.....I really feel proud today to be your friend......So keep up the good work going!

Excellent stuff really awesome.................

take care....
Have a wonderful time...
bye


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