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20th December 2012, 09:06 PM
Tujhay is qadar chahoon,
Har baat bhool jaaoon!
Dear Ahna...aap keh rhi hai ki yeh pehli poetry hai, par ahsaas dekhe jaaye to pehli nahi lagti  hame opper likha sher behaddddddd accha lga...aap koshish karti rhe aise hi thoda thoda likhne ki, hame yakeen hai ki aap aik din SDC ke maane hue shayroN meiN aayengi...ameeN
god bless u dear
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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