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18th April 2021, 02:21 PM
Dear dhaval,
aapki likhi ghazal bahut khub lagi... pahale padhana aur ab aapko padhana.. bahut parivartan aaya hai.. matureness jhalakane lagi hai.. shabdo ke chayan me barikiya aa gayi hai.... ummide kerta hu .. jald hi duseri peshkash aapki padhane ko milegi...keep writting..God bless you..
shubhkamnao sahit
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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