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15th October 2006, 07:02 AM

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Originally Posted by manoj kureel View Post
miley na jo mehnat se do bhi nivaale
roya maiN dekh apne haathoN ke chhalley

kareiN bhi gilaa ab to kis se kareiN
humhiiN ne to saaNp aasteenoN meiN paale

Gham-e-ziNdagi ke aNdheroN meiN jaanaaN
terii yaad ki sham'aa se haiN ujaale

kuch aur hi baat thi unki saaqi
vo dete the bhar ke jo aaNkhoN se pyaale

badi aarzoo hai ke mehNdii lagaa kar
vo aa ke mere kafn pe khaak daale

chali aana saara jahaaN aazmaa kar
maiN baiThaa huuN apni wafa ko saNbhaale

"maikash" tere baad dhooNdeNge tujhko
"sharaabi,sharaabi" tujhe kehne vaale



WAH...! WAH..!!!
Maikash bhai
namashkar
har sher..ek chalakta hua "jaam" hai aapki gazal ki "botal" ka...jaise jaise padhta gaya...waise waise surur chathta gaya...!!pilana wala jab aap jaisa "saaqi" ho to "maikashi" ka mazza hi kuch aur hai.!!
ek "toote paimane" ki bharpoor daad kubool kijiye...!!
-MANOJ

Manoj saahab

aadaab-o-namaste

bhai aapke tabsire ne to "botal" uthaane pe majbuur kar diya

ab subah gar tabiyat bigdi to uske zimmedaar aap thehre


mazaaq bar-taraf, daad ke liye shukruguzaar huuN aapka, dua-salaam karte raha kijiye


maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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