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Originally Posted by manoj kureel
miley na jo mehnat se do bhi nivaale
roya maiN dekh apne haathoN ke chhalley
kareiN bhi gilaa ab to kis se kareiN
humhiiN ne to saaNp aasteenoN meiN paale
Gham-e-ziNdagi ke aNdheroN meiN jaanaaN
terii yaad ki sham'aa se haiN ujaale
kuch aur hi baat thi unki saaqi
vo dete the bhar ke jo aaNkhoN se pyaale
badi aarzoo hai ke mehNdii lagaa kar
vo aa ke mere kafn pe khaak daale
chali aana saara jahaaN aazmaa kar
maiN baiThaa huuN apni wafa ko saNbhaale
"maikash" tere baad dhooNdeNge tujhko
"sharaabi,sharaabi" tujhe kehne vaale
WAH...! WAH..!!!
Maikash bhai
namashkar
har sher..ek chalakta hua "jaam" hai aapki gazal ki "botal" ka...jaise jaise padhta gaya...waise waise surur chathta gaya...!!pilana wala jab aap jaisa "saaqi" ho to "maikashi" ka mazza hi kuch aur hai.!!
ek "toote paimane" ki bharpoor daad kubool kijiye...!!
-MANOJ
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Manoj saahab
aadaab-o-namaste
bhai aapke tabsire ne to "botal" uthaane pe majbuur kar diya
ab subah gar tabiyat bigdi to uske zimmedaar aap thehre
mazaaq bar-taraf, daad ke liye shukruguzaar huuN aapka, dua-salaam karte raha kijiye
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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